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April 8, 2010
Disney Movie Reward's Engaging Incentive


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From: Disney Movie Rewards
Subject Line: Earn Bonus Points When You Visit Our New Site
Date: Thursday, April 8, 2010

Disney Movie Rewards sent an email unveiling their new website design in a creative and compelling manner.

The offer: Earn 100 reward points by exploring our new website.
The rules: The CTA loads a PDF with "treasure hunt" instructions.

Each of the 5 steps earns you points while guiding you through the website, and providing incentive to do so.

I love this idea. Way to think outside the box, Disney Movie Rewards!


March 23, 2010
Read It Now: Retail Email Unsubscribe Benchmark Study 2010


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Did you know that more and more retailers are simply clicking the Spam button to unsubscribe from email lists? Not a good trend for the health of our email programs, by any means. So what's a retailer to do? Read the latest report from Chad White. Highlighting examples of the good, the bad and the downright ugly, this in-depth study will help you whip your opt-out process into shape. It examines the unsubscribe experiences at 100 top online retailers - covering everything from unsubscribe instructions in emails, to opt-out page components and confirmations, to the honoring of unsubscribe requests.

Get the whole scoop. Download the free report now
March 16, 2010
Personalization that ROCKS


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From: Amazon.com & Netflix
Subject Lines: Various
Date: Friday, November 6, 2009 - Friday, March 12, 2010

If you're looking to increase user engagement & loyalty, personalization is sure to help.

My advice:

1) Get creative. Think about what your subscriber would like to receive rather than what you want to send them. The more you know about your subscriber and use that information to target relevant messages, the more likely you are to hook that customer for the long haul.

2) Start a dialogue. Surveys are a great and easy way to find out what your subscribers are experiencing. If they report problems, work to correct them.

3) Seize the opportunity to add ratings and reviews to your website. They're sure to drive more traffic to your website. A good way to collect reviews: after a subscriber purchases a product, wait a few weeks (to give them time to test the product) and send them a friendly reminder to rate the product. Many people will be happy to share their good or bad experience.

Two companies that I've noticed do an awesome job at personalization are Amazon.com and Netflix. Here are just a few examples of great personalization emails that they send:

Amazon.com:
  • Lets you to create a gift list for friends/family and sends you reminders when their birthdays are approaching.
  • Allows you to be notified via email when a movie is available for order or pre-order, by request.
  • Suggests product suggestions based on your browsing and order history.

Netflix:
  • Sends emails asking you to rate your movies. By rating your movie, Netflix can recommend other movies you might enjoy, based on what other users enjoyed who also liked that movie. And what's really awesome, is that they allow you to rate the movie with one-click in the email itself, simple & time-saving.
  • Notifies you which movie has shipped and when you can expect it.
  • Asks you when you mailed your movie to determine if they are sending/receiving movies in a timely manner according to their policy.


March 9, 2010
DIY Cuteness


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From: crewcuts
Subject Line: cooper's D.I.Y tips
Date: Saturday, March 6, 2010

This is actually a spread from the physical catalog, but it completely grabbed my attention, and I'm hoping for crewcuts to create an email campaign based on the DIY idea. I have always been into crafting and all things creative, and particularly adore the ruffled seasaw dress with the dots. There's part of me that has an aversion to the idea of spending $64 for a kids dress and then messing it up with a marker, but really, the dot-finished look is like cuteness personified.
January 18, 2010
Email Poetry, Part Deux


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In October, I wrote about the genius EEC Marketing Haiku Slam. Since then (at random moments on the elliptical or on an airplane), when inspiration strikes I jot one down. My most recent favorite is below. I'd love to hear yours!

A/B Test
Ideally I'd split
My existence and test B
Against the control

Deep thoughts on a Monday morning... :). Have a great week!

December 21, 2009
Obama Sent Me a Card


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From:
Mitch Stewart, BarakObama.com
Subject Line: A holiday video for Van
Date: Thursday, December 17, 2009

I have to give it up - Obama's stellar team of campaigners continues to impress. There has been a proliferation of personalized videos in the past few months such as Gap's Cheer Factory to Land's End's Big Boston Warm-up. Last Thursday, Obama sent me a holiday card and I LOVE IT.

These videos take personalization to a new level, placing dynamic content such as a name in different parts of video clips. This effect has such a great impact. I've gotten used to seeing my name in the email salutations, but not in a streaming video. Who doesn't like seeing their name on a card signed by the President?

Great job, Obama team!
December 10, 2009
Love The New Facebook Privacy Settings


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From: Facebook
Subject line: New Privacy Settings
Date: Wednesday, December 9, 2009

Great job by Facebook making it easier to share and not share. Once you have lots of people on Facebook you are bound to have a mixture of who you know (from college buds to in-laws). You need to post on a "need to know" basis. Now you can.

The "Specific People" option lets you choose friends individually or from your predefined Friend Lists.

So for a small business, you could do social posts just like you send targeted email. Don't think you can do that yet for a large business due to restrictions on Friend List sizes.
September 28, 2009
She's Got Designer Eyes


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I've always been blown away by the way designers bring copy to life. The way they think is completely different than how I think. I think in black-and-white word docs; they think in color, color, color. Bringing these two ways of thinking together is what creates the perfect email.

Coach put a fresh step in my inbox with this newsletter. At first glance, I loved the way they gave the product silos in the hero some breathing space by not confining them to a box. That said, it also felt like too many tricks in one bag. To get the real scoop from a designer's POV, I enlisted Amy Hamilton, SH designer extraordinaire, to help me out with the 360-degree look at the creative.

Here's what she said:

My first thought when seeing this email was, WOW COOL, this is different! I immediately noticed the overlapping text, colors and imagery. Coach is definitely creating a style here.

However, after the initial WOW factor wore off, my eye wasn't sure where to go. The hero copy and right rail copy seemed to fight each other, and the lower half of the email felt a bit cluttered. The call to actions also fell pretty far below the fold. While this email has some nice and inventive approaches, I think it could use a little more focus. I would suggest:

  • Move a call-to-action above the fold
  • Create a primary message focus by expanding the hero image through to the left rail, or by bringing down the font size in the left rail so it's more obvious that it's a secondary message
  • Use a unified headline and copy treatment (as well as HTML text for body copy)
  • Clean up a bit of the cluttered imagery at the bottom
September 10, 2009
L.A. Times Goes Horizontal


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From: Latimes.com
Subject Line: The new Latimes.com

With a little help, I finally got my hands on the L.A. Times website redesign email mentioned in a comment about my August 24th post about Hollister. I have to say... I love the originality of this email. It feels totally out of the boxy grid, which is fantastic. It's brilliantly simple and provocative. Since they don't TELL you how it's different with a bunch of copy, they create a bit of mystery. They want to SHOW you the difference.

Some cool stuff to mention:

  1. I love the headline and the "Scroll Right". Giving direction is key.
  2. I also love the big ink spot. It's got this free-form, Jackson Pollack feeling to it. Dig it.
  3. The "Take Our Tour" call to action totally delivers on the "Scroll Right"
On the downside, I think it's a big bummer that they're not doing anything more with this template. While on the hunt for this particular email, I signed up for every email subscription I could on the L.A. Times site. After sorting through the 15 or so emails each day for a week, I gave up. They were all the typical vertical email format you see with other news organizations. Wish they'd done a multi-email campaign about the redesign, highlighting a different part of the site with each email.

As for a best practices miss, they didn't use a preheader. Plus, they don't give me a link to update my preferences or my account, which I think they should. As much as I love the focused message of the email and the lack of clutter, I do think they could layer in a few understated links to drive people to do stuff on the site, without taking away from the sleek creative. Anyone else have thoughts about this one?  



August 28, 2009
The Artist's Touch


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From: Ann Taylor
Subject Line: Meet Our New Designer + Shop Our New Perfect Pieces.
Date: August 24, 2009

I love the way that Ann Taylor unveils a new designer in this special email. This approach aligns perfectly with the current trend of putting real faces on big companies and of forging more of individual connections with customers and email subscribers. Not only do we get a literal face to associate with Ann Taylor designs, but the entire email creative represents the artistic process behind all Ann Taylor clothing. The swatches and sketch allows subscribers to envision the creativity and thought invested in clothing by real people, allowing shoppers to feel like they are purchasing something special and unique.
August 24, 2009
Taking the horizontal route


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From: Hollister
Subject Line: Woke up in shreds
Date: August 23, 2009

First things first. Love this subject line. Love it. I had 30+ emails waiting in my strictly retail email inbox this morning and this is the first one I opened. What I also love is that the subject of the email delivers on the promise of the subject line. It's all about torn-up jeans.

Two big misses for me: 1) At first, second, and third glance, I didn't realize this was a horizontal email. I love that they're exploring a new perspective, but they need to offer some copy to help their email subscribers along. This is a shift in the norm, so a little help would be good. A cool "Keep scrolling" would've helped me figure it out, at least. 2) An even bigger issue for me is that there's no CTA. A simple "Get shredded" would do the trick. 

But, even without the CTA, I clicked on the image anyways and was taken to a fantastic landing page within the chick portion of the site. What I can't figure out is how Hollister knew I was a Betty and not a Dude. They never asked when I signed up for email, so I'm thinking they just guessed. Rather than taking a 50/50 shot, my suggestion would be to just add a question to the sign-up a process: Are you a Betty or a Dude? Or better yet, add two CTAs to the email, Betty Shop and Dude Shop. 

At any rate, the subject line rocks and so did the landing experience. Now, to try and fit into those skinny-leg shredded jeans... but that's another story for another blog.
July 21, 2009
Hang Out in the Hollister Lounge


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From: Hollister
Subject Line: Have you heard our new tracks?
Date: July 21, 2009

Super-cool idea. Not-so-super-cool execution. The concept of creating a "lounge" on the Hollister site where Dudes and Bettys can listen to tunes is fantastic. Unfortunately, there are some glitches in the experience.

Glitch #1: When I clicked from the email, it took me to the homepage, rather than landing me in the lounge. Glitch #2: A streaming video with sound that has absolutely nothing to do with the music automatically starts playing and continues to play even when I click on one of the bands. It's chaotic. Glitch #3: I wish the album cover would pop up in the HUGE video space available on the page, rather than this dinky little pop-up window. It'd also be cool if they had a bunch of info about the band and their music influences.

On the plus side, I got to hear the entire song vs. just a snippet and they do have links to the band sites. All in all, I wish they'd dialed this experience in like they did for www.hcoridethewave.com.

April 5, 2008
Fashion in Action


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From: Saks Fifth Avenue
Subject Line: Watch Fashion in Action
Date: Saturday, April 5, 2008

The email's a snore, but Saks' Video Catalog is MAGIC! This is the most practical and useful marriage of video and commerce I've seen yet. It's fantastic to be able to watch the way a garment moves and falls on a figure; it gives us one more reason to shop online instead of making a real-life retail store stop. Check it out >

P.S. After browsing the Video Catalog, don't you just hate how much BETTER this email could have been!?!?


February 26, 2008
Video in Designs and Subject Lines


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From: J.Crew
Subject Line: The well-traveled tote (see video)
Date: Wednesday, February 13, 2008

From: Louis Vuitton
Subject Line: The first Louis Vuitton movie : Travel and Emotions
Date: Monday, February 18, 2008

While it is still logistically impossible to embed actual videos into email messages, we have found that including links to videos noticeably increases clickthrough. Here, I like how J.Crew and Louis Vuitton extend that idea to the subject line, presumably hoping to up open rates as well. I recommend this; it's definitely worth testing. I also recommend including strong visual cues to indicate links to video; recipients respond best to obvious treatments like play buttons and frame treatments that look like Windows Media and Quicktime players. Both J.Crew and Louis Vuitton could have added more visual flair to draw attention the video factor here. (Video: so hot right now.)


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